Angel of Death

Which do you prefer Mark or Aedomir? Well anyways Hi!! I haven't critiqued any of your work yet sorry, but I am not much of a critique artist. To get ...

I really love this. I mean its not everyday you get the chills while reading a poem. You made this guy seem so real with his emotions and first to ...

I loved this but as I read it I kinda got my own little beat and I think you should take out dirty where it says she falls to her ...

Heart Turns to Blue By Angel of Death Chorus Faded dreams turn into vivid memories When all my joys become my miseries Life through my eyes turn a different hue ...

This was sooo beautiful, are you going to continue it farther?

You sound like a really cool person I mean anyone who loves Law and Order is.

Bella- Bella sat on the bench in the dark park waiting for something to happen. She knew that Sam and Dean would be looking for her. They always needed her ...

I will finish this part of Lily of my Heart soon...and then to finish the whole story I'll add a Part 4.

Lily of My Heart Part 3: Eclipse in My Heart Two dark eyes bore through my soul like sun rays. I could feel their heat as I stared back. I ...

I liked it. I thought he was a vampire "spawn of death" well then it turns out they really are dancing. Nice how you tricked the reader.

Ok I am a huge fan of Supernatural (I love Sam and Dean) well anyways before anyone calls it I am Bella.( I don't like her very much but I ...

I know people may have a lot of questions and when you read on you'll find the answers. I am pretty much aware that this first part of the story ...

Thanks Penguin, I really am starting to see what you and Suzanne mean. I need to add more description and make it more traditional. I really don't think I know ...

I know I said I'd wait but I need to get this out of my system. Lily of my Heart Part 2: An Undying love Black umbrellas caressed the air ...

I really loved this. Its so original. I don't think I ever came across a dramatic poem like this on YWS. This was perfect in ever sense of the word. ...